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- A Basis for Proceeding
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Click hereIn this wheel you are the premise,
the immovable mover and pivot,
the hub, remiss umbilicus, and center
the hilum at separation,
the mark and merestone of the damned,
borne by an idolator in his adulation.
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twelveooneabout 13 years agothis says something
this says something
but what? A trance dance away from meaning?
Try moving back to nounier nouns. They do have a tendency to get the reader to relate. The tricks in sound OK, Score 4
