A French Rose 'Art of Archery'

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A French Rose
'The Art of Archery'

"The curved arch is embedded in a mind forever
the sensual swirls of grain and strand memorized
tied knots are an Art in woven perfection.
I should teach milady a lesson"

A rally of laughter rang through the crowd
as Lord Flatterbush did a peacock strut
Tossing Jina a handful of fear in spats
"Shall I remind you dear Lady of our wager?"

"No, My Lord, I recall the agreement well."

"Well?"

Lady Jina rose her bow glaring the distance
watching the tree line for leaves that gust
field grass waves and hair in ghost dance blown
drew her line taught to her chin and nose ...

she let the line and arrow go!

The crowd hush in unison then cheered
"A bullseye?" Lord Flatterbush sighed a smile
"Never no matter, I win I get you for the night
you win, you get me for the night, isn't that right?"

Drew his bow and slug an arrow, into a furrow
chuckles from the crowd, Flatterbush still smiled
"What time shall I arrive to your bedroom?
Madam Mosel, I am all yours for the taking,"

Lady Jina curtsy formally smiling at her prize
"Sir, you shall have a date with my shovel
and stables, whenever your ready,"
Lady Jina lightly mumbled, the crowd rallied

... Lord Flatterbush grumbled.

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
MAKE SURE OF THE WAGER

before the outcome is finished, TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
surprise.

Love the renderings when they have references to another time. What a supreme delight; Lady Jena's surprise for Lord Flatterbush. A witty delightful read.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
Now This is a Fun One.............

Well, for all except Flatterbush;

which just goes to show once again

that poetry can be fun

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Awesome Art

What a great series....

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uabout 19 years ago
Story Weaver

your poems are artfully told stories! Awesome... the way you weave the stanza's and the words in and out and up and down to get just the perfect effect!

amazed as always at your talent!

Kisses,

T

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
More that a poem...

it is instead a very engaging tale.

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 19 years ago
laughing....

and i was lead to initially believe it would have lead to greener pastures. but this ended up in the stables.......man......what a way to go......*LOL*. great job!!.......don

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Yes

I agree with Maria about your story poems, Art. Clever pen!

Maria2394Maria2394about 19 years ago
:)

I like your story poems. It takes a creative mind to tell a good story without saying a whole lot. keep up the good work :)

Ninja NookieNinja Nookieabout 19 years ago
Inside scoop

since I have the inside scoop, I am now waiting on the others:) And the Scarlet Rose, my favorite, where is it, thats been months ago, Art? Tapping my toes, waiting!

I love your Rose Poems,

Nin:)

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