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a little bit of loving

byMy Erotic Tail©

Trembling fingers
in fidgidy hand
sheets like a beach
forever sand

castaway in a room
like a deserted island
uncertain course
like jaws of a lion

soft eyes whimper
an inferno's fire
hands grip tightly
like pinching pliers

burried into each other
like stone thrown to sea
gentle kitten's purr
scratching wildly

crashing waves dance
like a wild horse's mane
lovers feeling game
like a hand in the flame

two hearts together
like a hummingbirds wings
sandman calling
like water down a drain

flesh meld together
like a heated oven
all in the flame
of a little bit of loving

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