- Erotic Poetry
- A Much Needed Break
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When I'm tense and terse,
bash me.
Make those colors of a darkened rainbow rise up,
hurt me ever so passionately.
When I'm fried and frayed,
take me.
Make that mark of a waffle upon my back,
hurt me ever so pleasurably.
When I'm scattered and saddened,
bind me.
Make a line of heat show itself bright,
hurt me ever so purposefully.
Break little me, I beg of You,
so in that my pieces,
I am made so completely whole. . .
So utterly. . .
So mentally. . .
So orgasmically. . .
Whole.
- COMMENTS
raney_dazeover 14 years agoThat you have an outlet for bliss. Many can't or refuse to understand the way we seek enrichment and joy. This is a wonderful expression of such joy. I understand.
writedoctorover 14 years agoOur pretty subbie has the talent to allow the readers inside her head, using the noun/verb break instinctively. She was born to be broken, to serve, to fall apart. Jen's salty tears of pain are her fault and she accepts to be complete via being dominated. Marvelous rhythm. I secretly wish for the day to control her. Reveling as I beat her.....as she asks.
lance gtover 14 years agoOne couldn't ask a sub to express herself better, as to how she feels. Loved it and you always, Lance
