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A Semen Sonnet

byWillOtheWisp©

The recipe's simple, just one part lust,
let the cock leaven to a swollen tusk,
then knead it and churn until it combusts.
Makes one silken serving of salted musk.

And to describe these curds of manhood spilt?
Like oil from a sweetgum's bitter roots.
Like vicious cascades of bullets of milk.
Like col pugno notes from a baritone flute.

Like a melange of melted ice cream and earth.
Like a navel full of candied fairy dung.
Like ambrosia scavenged from a dumpster
out back, still fresh enough for a savage tongue,

like the one which on your own parched lips is set.
Lend me those lips, and I'll return them wet.

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by twelveoone07/20/13

what des said

about the words, what you are doing at the front end is interesting. Now why did you break the rhyme scheme. Also the poem uses heavy end stop rhyme, one enjambement
Like ambrosia scavenged from a dumpstermore...

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by HarryHill07/19/13

candied fairy dung

I can tell you from experience, this is gross, as any one on latrine duty in the Middle World can tell you. Try the river lobster instead. Nice Poem.

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by Desejo07/19/13

Whoa. I'm reeling from sensory overload - and the fact that you managed to fit gems like these:
A navel full of candied fairy dung !!!!
Ambrosia salvaged from a dumpster
into a sonnet. Unquestionedmore...

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by erectus12307/19/13

well

done, lovely title

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