A thin line between love and death

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He's sitting at his bar
drinking a shot of Jack
(gun safety clicks off)
"What do you think your doing" he says
"This!" the other person says
(gun goes off)
He falls back over the bar
a woman runs up to him
screaming and crying
as hes holding his wound
where the bullet hit him
he gets up and walks outside
he falls to the ground
looks at the stars
and starts to remember
what happened tonight

(gun safety clicks off)

"What do you think your doing" he says

"This!" she says

(gun goes off)

As the bullet hit me in my
chest and i fall over the bar.

"Oh No!" she says as she drops
the gun on the floor. She runs
towards me, "What have I done?"

She grabbing a hold of me, crying
saying she's sorry. As I sit on the
ground, blankly, I take my hand away
from my chest and look at it. "If you
ever do that again, dont miss"

I picked her up and put her and
carried her to the bedroom. I walk
outside and now this is where I am.

I walk back inside and pick the
gun off the floor and walk to the
bedroom. I lay the gun on the bed,
and go to the bathroom. I get the
twizzers and pull the bullet out.
I grab the bullet and a towel.

I walk back into the bedroom and
place the bullet on her nightstand.
I grab the gun and wipe it off and
place it right behind the bullet.
I pull the covers up on her and go
to my nightstand and grab my laptop
and a small key.

I walk down the hall and go into my
daughters room and write her a note.
I kiss her forehead and leave going
to my gun case and open it with the
small key and grab my shotgun and
shells. I lock it with the key inside.
I grab my laptop and shotgun. And i
get in my truck and leave.

The next day I get an email from my
daughter. It said "Mom's crying now
and she cant belive what she did
and she wants you to come home
and i do too, dad"

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