Adrift

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All of me
Lost at sea
Adrift
A rag doll
Tossed about
On roiling waves
Thrown upwards
To catch a glimpse
Of heaven
If only for a second
Plummeting earthward
Wind violently tugs
At my hair
Saltwater dries
On my cheeks

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
lost

A rocky relationship ~ with its highs and lows. A tender rendering.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Each time read, you'll see there's more here.

Nicely done tears.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
this one

I like this most of your poems because you have moved from the literal....last two lines tie it together. keep working on your poems, each one has a piece of something special

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