Ancient Dance

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cymry
cymry
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Ancient Dance

Light, a dim soft glow,
Reaches through the night,
Reflecting in eyes that know,
That dance with giddy delight,

A touch, supple and sure,
Caresses the waiting skin,
Sensation real and pure,
To glorious to be sin,

Meeting in sensual embrace,
Inner fires burn and flair,
Moving with ancient grace,
Cries pierce the air,

Magnificent release,
Inevitable end of the start,
One last delicate kiss,
As ancient lovers part.

cymry
cymry
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Enjoyed

First peom, read here, and enjoyed so much, will look out for more peoms, thanks...

DuPainDuPainabout 16 years ago
Touched

You moved me deeply with it.

Adrian LeverkuhnAdrian Leverkuhnover 18 years ago
time, a word

I'm reminded of words from an old college prof that the most beautiful prose & poetry is often the most simple. This is a new voice, and an elegant voice, and I would encourage her to bring more of her work to us...

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Nice flowing imagery;

a good start ~

welcome to Lit - will be looking for more.

J.DoeJ.Doeover 18 years ago
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Attractive, engaging title, but the overuse of punctuation/ill line breaks, detract from the body of the poem.

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