- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Anninaki
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poses for eclectic negatives
Consciousness splits
love is venomous
love in flexibility
returning the bite
shadow collapses
maestro plays upon green fields
swallowed by its draft
lost leviathan cruises
across eroded seascape with
elements of blood bled
symmetry disarms dragon myth
as love depicts elements lost by control
- COMMENTS
Amyfriendover 17 years agoimages you create in this fine piece... Does "Anninaki"..have any relationship to Annunaki?
duddle146over 17 years agoEach stanza of this rendering spirits the reader away into images that caress the mind.
Bill Dadaover 18 years agoVery nicely done. Loved this line 'as love depicts elements lost by control'
TY,BD
RhymeFairyover 18 years agoWow ... what a spinner.
I love the imagery here.
This one took me to another world.
Love changes everything it touches my friend.
Good ... Bad .. to love we are all ... One.
More Please ~
Anonymousover 18 years agosmooth and easy . I just have a problem
with the reality of it. Maybe if the title was 'Anninaki
for dumb asses 101'. Yell me up if you return to earth,
where the waves kiss the evening sunset. sand
LeBrozover 18 years agoBlue-
As I mentioned to du~, this is a terrible thing to do, to this poor reader on a Sunday.
Not sure if this is English Lit 101, Basic Astronomy, or Intro to Anthropology; but in any case, praise to Buddha for the power of Goggle.
You've a fascinating read here, though not easy; more suitable to a specialty niche audience. Me? I need to decompress <grin>.
quietpoetover 18 years agoThe ability to pull thoughts together in a way that inspires is the mark of a poet, not just a spinner of words...
QP
Du Lacover 18 years agoNow this is right up my alley... a poem that made me go research and learn!!!! Upon learning a tad I see what you are getting at! Lovely and exciting blue a wonderful write that causes me to feel alive! Due to the need to learn and seek what others are learning. The connection of experience shared in a poem.
ty
du
Mentioned in the Sunday reviews
