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the aroma of sex
hangs around
the sound of your voice
like thought balloons
of a comic strip
about the surface of a lake
dancing with the sun’s reflection
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Anonymousabout 19 years agoexcellent
short sweet very creative and jetting images..
ty for the read
du~
Anonymousabout 19 years ago~
Very Cool!
I have never ever heard That analogy before!
it seems like the last two lines are a tail... I do not have suggestions, only that they fell hard after the beginning image.
~anna
