As I Lie Dreaming Of New Zealand...

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As I Lie Dreaming Of New Zealand...
An R-rated Narrative Poem C21
By Finleigh Breathless

As I lie dreaming of New Zealand,
She is greener than your eyes.
I belong to you always and a moment
Cradled in the sloping fresh grass
Or where the moistened sand meets the ocean,
Cooler breaking waves against a heat,
I taste and drink deeply from your lips, to intoxication,
Fingers lost in the thick silver waves of your hair.

Let me cover your flesh with tender kisses
And feather-like fingertips.
With my body, I thee worship:
Kiss your inner thighs,
Slowly reaching the twin jewels of pleasure.
Cupped in my left hand,
Light covering of hair gently teased
By long fingernails...

Tongue-bathing your precious jewels,
Making wet and slippery for fingertips
To slide and stimulate...
As my mouth and tongue begin
To sliver up the steel-like shaft,
Tracks of rich purple veins...

Teasing you still,
I let my tongue trace the sides of your burning erection,
Stopping just short of the clustered nerve-endings of the head.
I taste your sweat; gently lick the small pearl of precum from the tip.
You shudder, your cock twitches.

Starting underneath your tight ballsac, slivering up, drawing figures of 8
With my tongue, til I reach and kiss your sacred spot;
That exquisite pleasure ridge, where the head meets the foreskin;
I linger here long, kissing, tongue-lashing...
Your sighs, your cries like a song.

My taste buds graze your sacred spot once more,
Slowly increasing the circle of my tongue
To envelop the head of your cock
Your rush of excited precum tastes salty and sweet
Several laps and I begin –tongue caressing the sensitive underside-
To slowly suck you deep into my mouth


I feel your hips buck,
Your hard cock pressing,
Sliding into my throat.
I hear your breath quicken,
Your gentle moans of deep pleasure.
I suck hard, precum seeping into my hungry mouth.
Your legs being to twitch and tremble.

I slow the intensity of my suck
And tightly grip the base of your shaft
In the ring of my thumb and forefinger.
You sigh hard, so close to the edge,
That place where orgasm feels almost inevitable
And you fight to hold on.
Inside of me, I long and cry for you,
For your fingers to caress me and then...

Your first touch was like surrender,
Losing the fight between your conscience
And what was throbbing between your legs.
Fingertips exploring my slippery, swollen flesh,
Your thumb ever so lightly and repeatedly
Touching the exposed tip of my clitoris.
I rubbed hard at your crotch.
You opened your belt.

Holding the warm circle of my mouth
Just below the head of your cock,
I move from the position of worship between your legs,
So as your skilled fingers can rediscover
The heat and wetness of my lust.
Slip a finger inside, press...
My startled cry is muffled,
As your cock feels the tight grip of my throat.
In and out.
I suck harder.
"Stop!" you gasp.
"Stop it or I'll cum!"

I dizzily lie back,
You slide two fingers,
Awakening me inside
While your lips and tongue
Take my hardened clit.
I cry out your name,
Tangle my fingers in your hair.
Right on the brink,
You withdraw your fingers,
Probe my opening
With the tip of your tongue.

Smiling down at me,
You take your cock in your hand
And tantalizingly slide it
Along my smooth shaven vaginal lips.
"Is this what you want?", you tease,
Lightly rubbing the sopping head over my clit.
"Yes! Oh yes!"
"How much do you want it?"
"I need you, I want you inside me!
I want you to fill me up!"
My body aches.
Beads of sweat begin to form across your forehead.
You slide the head of your cock
Down to my opening,
Press gently,
Just an inch inside...
I lose control of my voice,
Such longing to be penetrated!

2 inches, slowly in...and out.
An inch at a time, teasing, stroking,
Finally giving me the full length
And delicious thickness of your cock.
U stretch and fill me,
Stroking slowly, deeply.
Violent waves of orgasm
Spread from the base of my spine.
I tremble, cry out, scream....

You kiss me
And rest your head against my chest,
Holding still,
Deep inside me,
Feeling the tight, pulsating pressures
Of post-orgasmic muscle.
I stroke your hair,
Feel you,
Your sweat melting into mine.
Throbbing inside of me,
Hold you inside.

You catch your breath
I grasp you inside,
Building sensation as you fuck me.
Words I breathe in such passion,
I shall not be held responsible for.
How long would I gaze into your eyes
And see sparks of pleasure
Like fireworks
Reflected in glacier-coloured waters.

With every deep and searching thrust,
You draw closer to the place you take me
When you sing.
The feelings you stir inside of me
Cause as many sparks to ignite full blaze,
Sparking again and again...

You sit up, holding me against you,
Still deep inside me,
Hard as steel.
Rocking gently,
Moving deeply,
Your words,
Taken unforgivably out of context.
A new sensation rises in me
Like a tingling hot spring,
I feel the urge to gush out all over you.

I ride you hard,
Increasing the stimulation,
The fire spreading from the base of my spine.
Feeling, growing, riding...
I let it out,
Screaming, shuddering,
Scorching your body.
"The first time", I whisper,
"I have ever..."
You silence me with a kiss.
Hold me close against the heat,
Sweat and arousal fluid.

Securing my legs around you,
You lay me back down,
Your body covers mine
Your eyes are burning
Pleading your need.
You thrust in me with a growing, pounding
Rhythm and intensity...
Shaking, sweating, cry for release,
Ride the edge,
Feel and ride the edge.

Your cries of ecstatic abandon grow stronger,
Their sound vibrating thru me;
And then...
Orgasm;
Explosion;
Crescendo.
I am thrown once more,
By the crescent wave that is your sound.
The passion in your voice,
As you break fourth in a steady stream,
Thrusting hard, twitching violently.
I feel it all,
Scream it out...

Now we lie perfectly still,
Pulses within our bodies slowing,
Melting clocks, time unfrozen.
I love you, Tim, I so long to say.
But in this moment,
Feeling is all.

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