Awareness

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Coming out from under the anesthesia
The pain is dull but ever present
My head is filled with cotton candy
Focus is impossible

I know I have lost something
Uncertain what it is
Or where to look for it
But I ache to find it

Something tells me to turn inside
I have lost myself
Rediscovery is within my power
If only I have the courage to search

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
TO SEEK WHAT IS UNKNOWN

to be lost or misplaced. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Aware

A mental searching for ones bearings after invasive surgery. Well described.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Whether literal or metaphorical, the message is the same, as you recover and try to get your bearings.

Softouch911Softouch911about 19 years ago
This is raw

I like the passion again in this poem. It feels raw and real. Often just the right word.

sophia janesophia janeabout 19 years ago
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And you do have the courage! I know exactly what you're talking about- going through it myself.

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