Baba Baby

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Baba8
Baba8
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Baba Baby


birth, in a skinny
Persian, hospital.

Two women, birth speaking
mother talk, birth chatter.

Mother's lamentation,
rings true.
"I'm not leaving
without a baby."

Mother admires feeding breast.
"He's a good eater."

Father admires breast.
"That's my boy."
"Look at him go."
Head butting
increases the flow.

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
A NEW KIND OF NURSIN-EY RHYME

poetry or prose. TK U MLJ LV NV

BedwenchBedwenchover 15 years ago
Well written

Strong imagery and concisely worded. Each word carries its weight to weave its tale of switching babies. The reference to headbutting is particularly colorful in its imagery.