tagNon-Erotic PoetryBeach Villanelle

Beach Villanelle

bysandspike©

talking long and lean my beauty queen
dressed up in colors that soothe this bloke
aquamarine, you know what I mean?

laid out low a site to be seen
pale blonde beaches the crashing waves choke
talking long and lean my beauty queen

life is anew with all senses keen
wash in her hues wade in for a soak
aquamarine, you know what I mean?

view is the same but not the routine
drink it all in no words to be spoke
talking long and lean my beauty queen

I'm up all night to prolong the scene
watching the sun birth bright as a yoke
aquamarine, you know what I mean?

have a longneck pick amber or green
I've just gotten started on Ocracoke
talking long and lean my beauty queen
aquamarine, you know what I mean?

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