beauty

by2rivers©

unturned stones
life beneath
organic
mired in health

under water flow
unseen current
nothing like electricity
more brilliant

half sucked candy
smaller but just as delicious
goes from mine to yours
back again inhaled,

like ears reel-in sound^
upper inflection at the end^
if this was audio^
holding, waiting

falling, the opposite

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