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it was against a cloud curtain
upon nimbus carpets

all through the day
I was looking then looked at and asked-
"do you know who I am?"
"do you remember what you did to me?"

some smiled,
not all

no night fell

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
NOR ANY ANSWER

that gave credence to truth. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
vague

Vague recollections have a way of being very unclear.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Another smithpeter piece

To hold up against the light ~

See what you think.

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