- Erotic Poetry
- between a star and a son
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Click hereyour sun shines in the center of my world, and i rotate round it in vacuous abandon. my heart hurt once, but now it beats to push me one more revolution. this is reckless. i am bound to fall into your heat and lose myself entire, but i can't stop spinning. other stars wobble round you, but i repel them as i can. they see only your light, disregard your heat. it's this i need, this hot, dark luminescence that strokes my beams into being and holds me fast in my orbit. i'll keep this heat to myself, hide it under my hair. i know you can smell the dank blaze of my breath, pouring out of me in waves of you, perspired. i'll hide it as long as i can, and then hurtle myself into your corona, and keep my secret safe.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoAn interesting experiment in prose that I'll have to come back again and read a few more times. Congrats on trying something new.
Amyfriendabout 17 years agothrew me for a loop (Son) as did the poem. I read it twice and I loved the words but the Puntuation Police will have a field day with this one.
