- Non-Erotic Poetry
- beyond the gray
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Click herepassion relinquishes its glow
once ignited by illusion
souls turn ashen
amidst autumn winds
gray sweeps outer beauty
drawing death shadows
life rekindles within
an enchanted kiss
as center of stimulation
dawns
final destination
of inner symmetry
- COMMENTS
duddle146about 17 years agoThe flow was nice. Your beautiful magic words poignant and delicate.
LeBrozover 17 years agoHaiku on steroids?
Perhaps, but than that describes much of what you write.
I prefer to hear the message here
As all beauty lies within
And when the world turns gray
Vision's turned inward.
Anonymousover 18 years agoGreat exprssion of what can go on inside-this soul cage.
Du Lacover 19 years agoa dreamy read with the womb of haiku transformations... most wonderful...
du~
My Erotic Taleover 19 years agothis is very good 'blue'
final destination
of inner symmetry ~~~~~
excellent poetry
with a twist of 'rain'
clever style made this
a masterpiece <grin>
very good poem 'blue rain'
WickedEveover 19 years agolike the word choices here. They all sound nice sitting there side by side.
jthserraover 19 years agoa quote I once heard in a movie (Against All Odds if I recall correctly), it went something like this: "Having is not nearly as good as wanting." I felt that in the words, the sudden fade of passion once the final destination was reached. I liked the phrasing and imagery here... very nice, and though fleeting, very erotic. Well done.
jim : )
