Blue Muse Bop

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Funk that groove.
Kinesiology moves me
bone deep, hip to hip,
slip rocks my cradle.

Liberty is shifting notes
switching in and out of time
to dream in closed eye
synchronicity. This jazz

don’t mind no p's or cues,
just slides straight up,
just twangs my muse.

Walking bass beat rhythms
fallen dancing at my feet.
Wag tailfeathers. You know
sweet blues melt cool,
swallow whole souls neat,

sparkle, flicker into flames
of leaping saxy fusion,
tenor toney, hollow honey
cruising to completion.

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10 Comments
tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE BASS LINE FOLLOWS

while the drummer lays down a beat. TK U MLJ LV NV

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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who am I to disagree with YDD

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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It even has a hard-edged jazz beat.

SappholoversSappholoversalmost 20 years ago
Langston would approve

I can see Langston Hughes enjoying the bee-bop of this poetry. (And I can see why you like Langston....and Neruda... I love Octavio Paz's writings about poetry, e.g., "The Other Voice," and his remarkable book about language and literature, "The Bow and the Lyre.")

Maria2394Maria2394about 20 years ago
now this is jazzy

loved it, lame FB I know, but I loved it :)

bluerainsbluerainsabout 20 years ago
blue

rocks in this .....smiles/blue

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Juicy Jazz

Well done!

An effective write and a happy read (or reed).

The alliteration in the last stanza really wraps the poem up in power.

Twang your magic muse, Froggy!

WickedEveWickedEveabout 20 years ago
I feel a need

to shake my butt.

There I go. I'm shaking it.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
A bit of fusion...

a step into a bit of the funky new. Very good

jim : )

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