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Click hereSkirt swishing,
Hair flipping,
Staccato footstep lyrical
A body in motion
Giddy, hysterical
The music that is you
The innate muse inside you
Creating
Even as you walk
Can’t wait to hear you talk
this one had a distinct rhythm that danced. Well done.
jim : )
It's so nice to see a new poet reveal his/her style. Nice imagery and a hint of alliteration. Good one!
It's so nice to see a new poet reveal his/her style. Nice imagery and a hint of alliteration. Good one!
A fairly new voice gives us images in short sharp phrases.
The final rhyme ties up the poem with a twist and greatly enhances it.
Keep writing like this.