Breather

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
TO GO OUT AS REFUSE

and to compost pile returned, TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Perfect fit between words and illustration; trolly knows not wherefrom he {or it} speaks.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Breathe.

I loved the "drifted through the room" line enclosed in smoke shown in the illustration that gave it a mystical look and thereby enhanced the meaning. The verse and picture are indeed inseparable. Top Notch.

TrollyTrollyover 18 years ago
From Under the Bridge

Pretty, but how does this qualify as "poetry?"

impressiveimpressiveover 18 years ago
This is a perfect example

of words and image being inseparable! Brilliant, Liar.

HulderHulderalmost 19 years ago
Very nice!!!

This one's a winner!

~hellbaby~~hellbaby~almost 19 years ago
A Winning Waft...

....Of well written words!

Thanks for the smile;)

minsueminsuealmost 19 years ago
DAYUM

Damn near perfect

TathagataTathagataalmost 19 years ago
I like this

it made me think of a whoosh of air , mixed with " her' perfume and yet

she's no where to be seen.

Nice piece

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 19 years ago
great!

tightly woven words wrapped into the perfect picture. This I like!

~Syn

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