- Non-Erotic Poetry
- But I Need You
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Click heremy heart hurts
knowing its time
to close the door
move on with my life
letting you go
I cry
feeling the tears
slipping silently down
leaving a path
like a river
my heart breaking
I hear you say no
please I need you
for what I ask
your ego
your pride
you don't love me
you never did
you reply
but I need you...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 17 years agoMany people never are able to distinguish between love and need. Even worse is when the relationship is based on mutual need - nothing but pain and sadness in the future.
Lovely job of bringing out the pathos in so few lines.
Regards, Jack
LeBrozover 17 years agoA relationship filled with pain
Even ending it's filled with pain,
So is continuing on with no change;
Time to move on and perhaps grow.
