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Butterfly Haiku 1

bylonelyhousewife32©

Like a butterfly
Feasting on sweetest nectar
I savor his lips

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by theognis03/09/13

*****

I just have to comment again. I have never read a more beautiful haiku than this one. I wish I could give it a ten.

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by theognis03/09/13

*****

Beautiful.

Five.

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by HarryHill03/09/13

nice

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by lonelyhousewife3203/09/13

Only time will tell
If the butterfly will fly
Or end in pieces

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by solsarouge03/09/13

Haiku

Great Haiku.

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