- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Can I Love You Metaphorically?
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I want to make eye contact with your past
while kissing at your present
with intent to hold hands with your future
allow me to love you....
metaphorically,
Stumbling through your spirit
falling in love with what lies within
hoping I can dwell internally
Let me inhale your intelligence,
and caress your character
exposing your morals and beliefs
showing me no fake ripple reflection,
just the authenticity of you
will you let me love you...
metaphorically
Allowing me to drift into your logic
and size-up your thoughts and reasoning
smiling tenderly at your pride
embracing your courage
awaiting your strength to seduce me
I'd gladly drown in your sea of tears
while throwing you a lifeline attached to love
saving you; while saving myself
Let me love you....
Metaphorically
~Rain~
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 10 years agoIf this is your first effort, I'm impressed. A lot to like in this one.
Five.
Cleardaynowabout 10 years agoI look forward to seeing more poems from you
todski28about 10 years agoI love the way you use the refrain it adds a nervousness to the let me love you, as if saying the metaphorically is your way of pretending you don't mean it, but the impassioned tone and use of "loving" language contradicts the refrain. Very well written 5 from me :-)
