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surrounds us
pushing, pulling,
waves of people surging,
the ebb and flow of human tide.
separated by years and miles,
still drawn together
yearning, needing,
floating towards each other
through time united.
casual glances
speak of meeting later
longing, wanting,
lifetimes in a moment.
brushing hands
pass crumpled paper,
location scribbled
secretly arranging
rendezvous of souls.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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A couple acting like a pair of CIA operatives and all for an evening quickie...
A couple acting like a pair of CIA operatives and all for an evening quickie...
This poem is mentioned in the New Poems thread on the bulletin board
the first 4 lines are a poem in themselves. I think you lose your focus a little towards the end, or maybe you reworked it so much you didnt know how to finish, I think you have the start of an excellent poem here, you just need to freshen it up in the last 2 verses :)