- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Chinese Water Torture
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Click hereHe always finds
a way to draw her
out of what she
knows is right-
to wheedle
just enough
to win her
over-
to nuzzle
just enough,
there,
on the nape
of her neck,
and she caves
like a falling rain
of tiny pebbles-
slow at first
like sand sliding
in a misty shower,
then more,
and the rocks
grow bigger
than all his thoughts
inside her head,
driving her insane.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 6 years agoNice to see you still about. I think of you every so often. Hope you are happy, healthy and well.
~ brightie
Anonymousabout 16 years agois it not? missed you babe. good to see your work again. as another has said, your readers have indeed missed you.
fancyface_418over 16 years agoTo have One who made me feel that way...His strength, His voice, His touch enveloping me. The very depth of Him piercing my soul.
Miss seeing you duckie, *hugs*
LeBrozover 16 years agoIt seems to just scream out for two more words at the end:<br>
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<i>with pleasure</i><br>
<br>
though it works so much better with them implied.
Anonymousover 16 years agoHappy to see you're writing (here) again, tiny dancer...your readers have missed you.
Angelineover 16 years agoSimple so it doesn't overwhelm the reader, but effective and yes, either erotic or non. I like the sand/pebble/rocks images: they pull the piece together, give it cohesiveness. Nice to see a poem from you. :)
