Christmas Haiku

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bitch cries silently
blank eyes gaze in the mirror
under mistletoe

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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
Another suggestion

Why "bitch"?

I could never respond to put downs and hate as entertainment. I am strange that way.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Rather than haiku, this strikes me as more senryu.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Rather than haiku, this strikes me as more senryu.

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
Damn

This is so well done.

Lisa DentonLisa Dentonover 19 years ago
Very nice

I like this a lot, see ya, Lisa.

sacksackover 19 years ago
a suggestion...

Go to the Author's Hangout part of the forum and challenge people to write a story based on these three lines! Magnificent!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
new poem review

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Review"

for Saturday Dec 11 2004

thanks for the read~

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