tagNon-Erotic PoetryCold Comfort

Cold Comfort

bytungtied2u©

Storm stalled mind
numb, chill
blizzard blind
no tip of nose
eyelash end

Frenzied flurry flash
dizzy, dancing
detours thought
crystal ice
distortion

Blanket biting sting
avalanche isolation
enforced torpor
flaked out
and under

Cloud white cocoon
catacomb quiet
cold comfort
quilts
consciousness

Awareness’ opposite
icicle suspension
imagination
drip drip
dripping

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