- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Color Me Disappointed
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Click hereBlushing no more
Only flushed from the anger
Of being ignored
Color me disappointed
Color me disappointed
Perhaps you forgot
I told you to begin with
I don’t take hints
Color me disappointed
Wishing you had only
Thanking the stars
I didn’t
Color me disappointed
I never did understand
The ignorance of man
And the disregard therein
Color me disappointed
Didn’t you know
You should never walk away
Without saying Goodbye
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoAn interesting read though when you slip into mangled Yoda-speak in the middle, I have to wonder what you're thinking. Plus, there's really very little substance here, though a hint of possibilities.
Anonymousover 20 years agoyour work shows an enormous flow of raw emotion with only a subtle glimpse to the written word...your readers would do well to allow their gates to open and ride! thanks again
