Comet

byLinbido©

 

i heard the perimeter
of a hundred breaths

shiver

persistent through
wallpaper and plaster
wood and concrete
penetrated

i heard the very walls

take a collective
gasping breath
from the shockwave
of impact

that shattered every
conscious connection
in this battered brain

and spread
like in the movies

when my soul exploded
shot like stardust
rained like flowers

for you

like it always do

 

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