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compared to grey

bylive4passion©

the world seems grey, compared
to you

tired cautious lines
from broken scripts

draught of fluid surrender yours, sweetness sublime
kissed, in woe of tears or ecstasy's throes

you bathe me, unknowing

what all it means, just to see, how I shine
in your eyes

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