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Click hereI would love to read all your work. Then again, I would love to hear you read me all your work. Its great.
the rhyme felt a bit forced. Working with rhyming couplets is tough, you might want to work a less restrictive rhyme scheme to help the poem flow a bit more naturally. You might want to make a correction to your third to last line: "there" wants to be "their". The audio was excellent and added to the poem. Overall, very good.
jim :)