Daddy Dearest

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doormouse
doormouse
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A sigh escapes
Desirous, lustful and hungry
Still craving

It swells
Growing, hard and enticing
Still drooling

My needs encouraged
Tense, clenching and ready
Still unsated

He penetrates
Pleasures, releasing and unperplexed
I love him

Toes curl
Gripping, again and again
He's done

A sigh
Satiated, relaxed and released
I feel him

Uneasiness
Embarassment, desires fulfilled
Who is he?

Cough
Awkward, apologies flow
I'm sorry Dad

Tears
Denial, lust and wanting
I'm sorry Mum

doormouse
doormouse
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9 Comments
uSolitary1964uSolitary1964about 8 years ago
Beautiful..

Deep, passionate and beautiful...

sacksackover 19 years ago
I'm hoping I don't understand it....

Not being an incest fan. BUT, very well conceived and executed!

Awful ArthurAwful Arthurover 19 years ago
Truth

So much said in so few words. Guilt feelings are often omitted from works of incest erotica, but they are usually there in real life. Very good poem. Very well written.

LadyJeanneLadyJeanneover 19 years ago
Whew!

You gave me an insight into something I've no understanding of, and you did it so simply, so touchingly. This is a little gem. Terrific work!

CumbabyCumbabyover 19 years ago
I'm touched!

Beautiful and erotic, well done

seasparksseasparksalmost 20 years ago
Not bad at all

You captured more in a few lines than most do in a dozen pages.

Keep up the good work.

(Much better than my stuff.)

KenJamesKenJamesalmost 20 years ago
Impressive

Very sexual but presenting a more honest view of the emotional consequences of incest than is common in erotic fiction.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
weird

Interesting poem. I didn't quite understand the meaning. Does it involve a child and a papa? Maybe I read it and got the wrong meaning. Your other stories are very good, this very incestual and strange.

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailalmost 20 years ago
Powerful~

I enjoyed your poem, very touching. (~_*)