Dark Winged

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Dark winged
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over trees and field:
Speed, motion,
in the quiet ecstasy of flight
wind-song the only sound,
                until:

Exit your world
enter mine...

Oily smell, powder flash,
too high to sense
too lost in wind-song
to know the lead
is coming.
Pain, pain, pain,
swirling fall
wings shatter

twigs snap,
earth rushes up
to the slap of
nothingness, nothingness.
Darkness fails
faint light and thud
vibrations: thud,     thud,
as footsteps, voices,
speak language of pain, fear.

Exit your world
enter mine...

I feel you,
your chevrons limp
in my hands,
I feel the shudder, the shudder
as your life reverberates
from you,
and I feel your soul
take flight.

Your blood is warm on my hands,
as I slip you into my bag
and take aim again.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A different view of bird hunting.

TheRainManTheRainManover 18 years ago
Nice job.

It's nice when the best poem of the day comes from a new name.

It was also nice, since I read from the bottom up, to have this last. It was a rough day of reading here, and you saved it with this one.

Please, keep posting. :)

oregon_galoregon_galover 18 years ago
wow!

I entered your world and exited mine for a bit...it was a powerful trip!

WickedEveWickedEveover 18 years ago
freaky

I read the poem. Incredible poem. I almost didn't listen to the audio, though, since I rarely take time for the audio. But I'm glad I did. That was quite an auditory experience. The musical accompaniment took it to another level. Of course, so did the energy that came through in your voice. And yes, my title is "freaky" and that is not meant in a negative way. I love unusual and little freaky. :)