Non-Erotic PoetryDate NightFalse laughter
escaped from her lips
as I made lewd innuendo
Twitch of eyebrow
What did he say?
Huff of realization
Flashing slap of red
Glove returns backhand
no gentle tap
Champagne cool splash
drips from face
Woman stalks away
Smoke seems to drift
behind her
Another date goes
down in flames
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Nice and precise
A good, tight poem capturing a moment - bravo. Sweet O.
This was a post for the 5 senses thread
took so long to write decided to put it here too
starts nice
refreshing territory
not sure ending in cliche is best move here
5ed
probably saved by preceding
Smoke seems to drift
behind her
An accurate , real-time description of
A date gone wrong ! 5-ed.
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