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Click hereFirst we're going to kiss
Then we're going to say
Dirty little words
Only lovers say
Strip us of our clothes
trail them down the hall
won't make it to the bed
I pin you to the wall
rake your nails down my back
I nibble on your ear
biting at my neck
my hands grab at your rear
Hot breath from your mouth
the moistness of your lips
movement of my hands
and dancing finger tips
Our bodies slick with sweat
pressing skin to skin
to be feeling this good
must surely be a sin
I work my way inside
thrust in hard and deep
cover your mouth with mine
so you make not a peep
Our tongues begin to dance
our fingers still at play
nothing anyone can do
to make this feeling go away
continuing I thrust
Pinning you to the wall,
with orgasm nearing
to the gods we shall call
our loins begin to quiver
our bodies start to shake
the aftermarth of orgasm
leaves a plesurable wake
Recovered from fit of passion
but still we continue to play
but thats another story
for another day
I don't mind being the 'bad guy' here because I know that in fact -I am not. I looked at the Bio. Like I thought, a young guy - It’s great that you write a poem. My sense, a poem gives you an opportunity to go beyond or underneath the skin. How about emotions AND passion? Would not that be a somewhat richer poem?
Looking forward for your next poem...
Our bodies slick with sweat
pressing skin to skin
to be feeling this good
must surely be a sin
After the first half, the rhyme and imagery become less appealing. Loved the first half, though.
~Syn