- Non-Erotic Poetry
- dont look down
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Click heredont look down
because its a long fall
into a bottomless abyss
keep your head steady
and your eyes on the prize
look at the hand reaching out
to guide you to the other side
where sanctity will be provided
just take it one step at a time
you told me not to look down
but am i even listening anymore
can i even hear you over there
because if so for once in my life
why dont i show some faith
i know you know i can do it
there now
i am doing it and
it feels good to know
that i am doing it and
nobody else but me
is doing this thing
and you are waiting for me
just on the other side of this poem
waiting for me to be held and loved.
- COMMENTS
WickedEvealmost 20 years ago"and you are waiting for me
just on the other side of this poem"
Great lines.
minsuealmost 20 years agoLoved it. The poem, that is. Not the troll...=0)
tungtied2ualmost 20 years agoabout where you were headed..but baby steps..one at a time got me where you wanted me to be. Thanks Steve.
Maria2394almost 20 years agothe way you reach out through your work. I always enjoy your poems, thi sone is no exception :)
