- Non-Erotic Poetry
- doo-wop for a demigod
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Click herewell yeah
doo-wop anything goes
whatever flows
from your fingertips
every odd and other night
tipsy trips travelled
from toreador to torpor
a little Halcion
in a lot of
hallelujah here comes
the body shots!
can go a long way
if told
from table tops
panicked parading
sugar iced crystal
one after the other
sneaking down
the sickly sweet
seduction
well yeah
i forgot
doo-wop everything works
when you're a fucking
renaissance rock'n'roll
(did I say doo-wop?)
shiny superstar
booty call free-for-all
barbie doll
anything, right?
that fans your heated head
and wraps a fiber glass
thread mesh
around the outer limit
of your constitution
us mere morals will remain
to suck up the confusion
like nectar
or saliva
or doo-wop whatever works
run over burning,
itching neck
chest
hips
thighs
oh those
thighs
to finally fall
into the puddle
of the rest of us
by your glorious
right on
rock'n'roll
fancy
feet
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 16 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.
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Anonymousabout 19 years agois a tight and nasty lil old benzodiazepine, akin to xanax, valium and ativan, only much stronger. in the US, is mainly used in institutional settings as of late... did you mean halcion? :D
PatCarringtonover 19 years agoi enjoyed this piece very much / it is pointed and very controlled / great work /
Honey123over 19 years agoThis made me smile and think that if Abstrusions were truly real, this is what would be happening, night after night ~ body shot after body shot!
Tathagataover 19 years agowith Ange.
I can't write this well, this clear and compact in my own language.
This had a great feel and flow to it.
Sarcasm and envy and bitterness with a touch of humor.
Lots to chew on
Thank you
Angelineover 19 years agoThis is brilliant, really. Funny, I was at a fall festival yesterday and a (quite good) jazz funk band was playing. I say a few chickies hovering stageside, so your theme was kinda on my mind. It amazes me that you write this stuff and it's not in your first language--maybe that helps????
