Doused

byJaneAusten©

You have mastered
me in this moment,
all sensibility gone.

No one word can describe
the perfection:

wet skin,
cat-stretched midriff,
open lips, gasping for breath,
trembling body,

(rapture)

doused by your love.

I have drowned
in our lovemaking.

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