tagErotic PoetryDown on the Shore

Down on the Shore

byUnderYourSpell©

Under the pier
where the sand is hard
but dry, we lay.
Hamburgers, bonfires
and even firework celebrations,
melt into insignificance
as your tongue sinks
between my legs.
Only the soaring gulls
echo back
my keening cries.

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by Anonymous

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by oneiria08/04/13

Very nice.

I like the transition in imagery.

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by Angeline08/04/13

Very clear and solid

a really strong image with sound and sense made clear to the reader. :-)

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by Tzara08/04/13

Ah, the cunnilingus poem!

My favorite subgenre of erotic poetry. Well done, UYS.

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by todski2808/04/13

Nice

I love the short simplicity, and the evocative images. I had to give it a 5.

Creating your own fireworks way more fun than watching them.

Only the soaring gulls
echo back
my keening cries.

so muchmore...

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