- Non-Erotic Poetry
- drunkeness
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cradled in your arms
i don't feel so drunk
i'll make us some tea
but ohmygod i have to pee
- COMMENTS
painful_raptureover 10 years agoAuthorThank you, thank you, for reading and writing so much!
And yes, this really was about drunkeness. I was laughing at myself, because every time I drink too much, as soon as I get up from sitting down, it's a race to the toilet.
Tsothaover 10 years agoHahaha. My first reading of this was a bit harsh, but looking at it again, I like how you start saying something seemingly emotional ("cradled in your arms / i don't feel so drunk"—this person does you good, gives you clarity) and then, it just turns out to be actual drunkeness. I like it.
I should have known, I guess—after all, when it's not about alcohol, people often feel *more* drunk when cradled in another's arms. ;)
