eiderdown whisper

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two fingers
wave goodnight
hidden under down cover

I whisper
the syllables
of our secrets
as the wave
comes to its finish

promises are the warm, quiet
feathers of sleep

as I rest my hand on
the impression your head
has left behind on my pillow
leaving my scent for your return

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sandspikesandspikeabout 20 years ago
You are really good

I read all your works this morning. This was my favorite.

It is soft and loving and very erotic. It reminds me of

S. Stills old song 'Love The One You're With'. In this

this case even if you are alone. A five if there ever

was one.

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
Beautiful

"promises are the warm, quiet

feathers of sleep"

That is great writing!

It's one of those lines that I've searched my whole life to find and you said better than I ever could have.

very nice stuff here

Thank you

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