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- Elders in a Dark Meadow
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and liver spots,
flesh cleaves to flesh,
undulating in a bed of moss.
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Maria2394about 10 years agohmmmm
the phrase "liver spots" evokes a sort of unpleasant image, but the poem is really good. I liked it the way it is, but I would probably change that to something else, but that's just me :) Keep up the good work!
todski28about 10 years agowhat you do better than most
is cram a hell of a lot of imagery into the lines you use with a blend of white space to give the reader the contemplation they need to put it all together.
