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Scotsman69
Scotsman69
270 Followers

Empty inbox

the loudest silence

in the world

Scotsman69
Scotsman69
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amadeuseroticamadeuseroticover 5 years ago
Add one syllable to the first line

and 2 syllables each to the 2nd and 3rd line to make it into a haiku.

Voilà: Your inbox is empty no more.

Scotsman69Scotsman69about 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you,

anonymously curiousflower. My inbox could do with filling...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
May I help fill that in box? I'm just acuriousflower, you know...

I'm just acuriousflower, you know...

BlueStarGrrrlBlueStarGrrrlover 11 years ago
Good Lord, Scotman69

As if you ever have an empty inbox ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
my

inbox is empty too

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
An apology

My outbox has gone South ... Or to sleep zzzzzzz

DawnJDawnJalmost 12 years ago
I hear the silence...

...and it calls to me.

demure101demure101almost 12 years ago
It took Dorothy Parker

five pages (in A Telephone Call) to say roughly the same.

njoyjadenjoyjadealmost 12 years ago
Silence speaks volumes,

these eight words do as well! :)

raconteuseraconteusealmost 12 years ago
This poem

was mentioned in the new poems listing for yesterday. Congratulations on making a splash with your first poem: "Scotsman69, prolific Lit story author, posts his first poem: "Empty". Aphoristic, and only eight words, so I'll just let you read it yourself.

I liked it.

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