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Click hereExperience excitement
exposed, exploring
naughtiness.
Unleashed, on this poor
unsuspecting woman.
Bringing abandonment
home. Driving needs,
coasting
singing through.
Sizzling veins,
of wanton cravings.
Pictures, of every way
possible, to drink
of lovers juicy
jelly.
Binding close,
with cuffs of steel,
cobwebs of netting,
restricting,
restraining
from movement.
Come explore,
with feather
brushings of silk.
Sensually smooth
tickles
laps around anal
openings. Charming
chest chuckles,
come cascading out.
Chilly cold ice,
nubbing nipples,
nipping. Encamping
in meadows, of sheer
shaved snatches.
Massaging oils,
gels of gentle
coercion.
Warming the
forbidden flesh.
Fondling mosaic
muscles, mapping.
Tiptoeing
maneuvers, across,
tired, tiger tight
temples
of maidenly worship.
Toe suck those arched
heels, of narrow,
bitten pathways.
Whipping, extracting
eager moans, masked with
leather spikes,
spanks of merriment.
Metamorphic mouse
turned, teasing
pussy, in the ambiance
of slaves masters,
dungeons.
Delightfully dance,
dripping hot liquid
wax, waltzing over
whelped white skin.
Come away with me.
Abandon
all preconceptions.
Open yourself to feelings
of epic extravagance.
I can make the pictures,
a reality. Join me,
in sensational
sexual dungeons,
of mind and body.
Beautiful...
"I can make the pictures,
a reality. Join me,
in sensational
sexual dungeons,
of mind and body."
This paragraph is definately my favourite, especially the last 3 lines.
And you think I set a page to fire?
O'NO... that would be you my girl!!
at the end of a long hose, and
the city in flames....
VERY HOttttt! Very Sttteamy!
seduction, you are so good at it !
-sGp-
rhythmic mind never stops...always a nice view from the fairy of rhyme...pen on...blue
but would work on the line breaks.
Also, punctuation, i.e. the comma after metaphoric mouse, do you want it there? You might find by changing your line breaks, you need fewer commas and can acheive the same thing.
That being said, I love your turn of phrase, and there are several here I like-
Massaging oils,
gels of gentle
coercion.
and
Tiptoeing
maneuvers, across,
tired, tiger tight
temples
of maidenly worship.
You're doing great....all in all a yummy read.
"I can make the pictures a reality. Join me,in sensational sexual dungeons, of mind and body."
My favorite line.
another nice write and it seems you just get better and better I am impressed always by your versatility and erotic writes.
Damn girl!
You covered it all.
Are you sure the title shouldn't be ~
breathless?
Such innocent play with words erotic,
covering scenes that can be exotic;
all that's left to say is,
"I surrender."