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Face Fuck Book #142—Desdemona

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Face Fuck Book #142—Desdemona

Used to hang out a lot
       in the Village Coffee Shop
Always alone
       Desdemon
In a world of her own
       Daydreaming of night
       Night dreaming of day
Tied to a hundred points
       a thousand lands
            ten thousand traditions
We had no chemistry
       no history
On her whim we left
       tasting of espresso
Spent the night together
I entered her
       she lay silent
When I withdrew
       she burst into tears
"I can't do this," she said
       dressed quickly
       rushed off into the night
I saw her again
       several years later
             on a Harley
Wearing a Motorcycle Jacket
       Black Shiny Boots
       Buzz hair cut
A young femy thing in a short skirt
       seated behind
       arms around her
       breasts pressed against
She turned to me,
       "Every driver needs a mount"
All she ever wanted was
               cunt
       to splay its center like
        a ripe pomegranate"
She has no desire
       for penis
       piercing her like a can opener
But to please
       she'll tease
              her partner and ease
       a lubed rubber baton
              deep inside her vag
Trying to fill the emptiness
        Desdemona no longer
              feels inside

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by UnderYourSpell08/20/13

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Fabulous even though it's pared right down you still keep the flow going and the story held me to the end. Very happy to give it a 5

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by todski2808/20/13

Love this one E

nailed it, pun intended

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by Angeline08/18/13

This is excellent

and you have taken such care to pare this down to the essential story, reportorial and somewhat voyeuristic but also poetic. Like 12 said, this has become your poetry. I don't have an issue with your usemore...

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by twelveoone08/18/13

well

mr. E, what is missing? not much, you are just about hitting it all with economy, this is your style, and now your POETRY, I would like to think I had a small part, but fuck me,
here's your 5 with no hemming,more...

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by HarryHill08/18/13

Hard to pick a favorite out of all these

Liked this line. to splay its center like
a ripe pomegranate

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