Falling Like Water

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Like Water Falls
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I know what you need.
I know how you want it
I know you are nervous
But I am here
You will obey me
Trust me
I am going to take you
Take you over the your edge

My hands caress your legs
Like lake water at the shore
You are between the shallow
And the deep
When I tie you
Submissive
You can go down

Vulnerability
Overwhelms your senses
Like a giant wave
Feelings of helplessness
Rise in and fall over you
I am so proud to see you
Be strong
There is a heavy current of fear
And in my toys
A sharp spray
That bites and stings
And becomes more violent
Like a torrent

Taking you under
So as it rushes you
Headlong for more
Of this luscious
Freedom and communion
With this power
That is now in control

You need it desperately
I will hear you when you beg
Beg for the abyss
And know that
I will deliverer you to it
Seized by the great volume and rush
Of being carried away


And when you come to your senses
I will still be there
I will take you into my arms
And I will hold you there
I will not leave you
I will not let go
Until you are still
Like a pool

You may never know
How much you have given me
But you will know
That I have given you
A gift
A strength
That will save you
From giving away
Things that you shouldn't
Because you needed it.

And when we are together
That strength will make
Your submission
Taste
All the more sweet

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