FAT

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Not a bad word is fat,
And for you to think that,
Is obscene.

Dismissing the person,
Your ignorance hurts them,
You’re so mean.

She has a pretty face.
Rest of her’s a disgrace,
Can’t be seen.

If all you see is that,
Not the person just fat,
‘Cause you’re lean.

Her body weight blinds you.
All that fat reminds you,
She’s not clean.

You’re the pig and not her,
Like that to label her,
She does preen.

So what…that she is fat.
She’s better than all that.
You’re too mean.

To see her…who she is.
To love her…what she is.
She’s a queen.

Not a bad word is fat,
And for you to think that,
Is obscene.

Years from now when you’re fat,
And all see you as that,
You’ll be seen,

As stupid and lazy.
Ignored…drives you crazy.
See? It’s mean.

Too bad that you’re now fat,
When you’re better than that,
When once lean.

Now you understand her,
Will love and respect her,
But your queen,

Is gone…left with big John.
She wrote a note…So long.
She’s his queen.

What do you think of that,
Now that you, too, are fat?
…and that’s that.

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3 Comments
virgin2267virgin2267over 15 years ago
Very cool Freddie

I loved this poem. It's about being realistic and not expecting everyone to be a size 3. Love that person for who they are, not how they look. Thanks Freddie You Rock!!

your fan, vick

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Move over Paris

Thank you fictionwriter for not condemning a woman who is not a size 2. this country is biased against anyone woman and only women who are not the hollywood type. I would be ashamed if I was one of those people now. Thankfully it is changing somewhat as the old hollywood producers dye off with their prejudices and hatred for anyone who is not blond and thin.

What a wealth of women men lose out on when they stick to the stick.

SamuelxSamuelxover 15 years ago
I like your style

Hey, there. Just wanted to say I enjoy your stories. I like your style. Keep it up.

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