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Feral Companion

byScheherazade73©

It grappled and growled at me
a starving thing
sharp bones and sharper need
and I tried, I tried
to leash it but
I just didn't know
that had I fed it from my hand
and loved it
it would have sat at my feet
and begged to be tamed.

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by greenmountaineer12/07/12

Very nice! Concise, flowed well, strong imagery the reader can do something with: fill in the blank for feral companion. Made me think of Quasimodo.

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by Anonymous12/07/12

It

So many meanings for "it." Loved the alliteration, the g's, s's, and t's. "sharp bones and sharper need" was my favorite line. "I just didn't know," how often that's true.

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by tazz31712/07/12

THE TAMING OF THE NEW

whether a pet or a habit, TK U MLJ LV NV

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