- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Five Minutes To Flush
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infrared
Italian
or nutritious wheat bread
Bagel
and doughnut
Yogurt
and ice cream
Chair
and seat
Shout
and scream
Lined up men
and alley guys
Mr. group 5 of 3
them lacking name
see no eyes
Lawyer shows on T.V
multiplied repeatedly
over again
like 1, 2, 3 !
Do it again for fun
funny shows all the same
Which ones goes first?
Nobody knows
Movies do it all the same
entertainment
fashion
literature
justice
human nature
Over & over again
beating us
and make it lame
Why can't we make original stuff?
No!
We're scared!
so nothing new
clone these things
until we've had enough
Five minutes to flush
Four minutes to start
Three minutes to assimilation
2 late to break apart
one chance at redemption
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 20 years agoI can feel the frustration, and your rhyming scheme seems to amplify it. Nice job. The lines and rhymes feel "tight" and precise; the meaning is strong, and cleverly conveyed. I enjoyed it. I might've changed the very last line, though. It felt as if it broke the rhythm of the poem.
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